--- I don't have premium membership so I can't request a critique, but I need it. I'd be grateful (and I mean 'Llama grateful') for any kind of constructive comment.
Try to remember 1/3 I know many may say awww what ever but it helps when you try to get balance with your subject. Bring up the light just a little bit into the higher bottom 3rd and it would give you more impact. However, it is a nice shot and your getting a lot better.